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1Write a paragraph about job Empty Write a paragraph about job Mon Aug 27, 2012 3:38 pm

Lawliet



Some people say that a modern person should have several careers or ways of earning money. They think that the idea of pursuing a single career for life is becoming an old fashioned one.

Do you agree or disagree with it?


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Support for “pursuing a single career”. Because:
- Significant contribution for a company -> Earning the trust of the boss -> promotion
- Having intimate relationship in the company
- Accumulate more experience -> become an expert -> be respected
- Choosing a career due to passion.

First of all, people who work a long time for a company earn the trust of the boss. Therefore, he openly share information with his employees and empower them in his work. It is clear that they also promoted more easily thanks to the significant contribution. Secondly, intimate relationship derives from a long time working in the company. That is always essential not only at work but also in life. Thirdly, only focusing on a field enables them to accumulate more experience and become an expert in that field so that they are respected. Furthermore, many people choose a career due to passion. They are not interested in income, but they just pursue own dreams. For instance, volunteers participate in charity work because they want to help the poor.

2Write a paragraph about job Empty Em Ninh gui bai Mon Aug 27, 2012 9:27 pm

ninhlh1990



Outline :
Agree : Have several careers
Because :
- People more active, want to have new opportunity , new challenger
- The rising of price => have to do more => more money => better life
- The financial instability of company => influence to the salary
Ex :
- A person who is working as a teacher can also be an architect, an engineer, a manager...

In today's rapidly developing society the issues of careers has aroused public concern. There have been several opinion on this topic, oe typically suggest that people should do a single career to earn money for life. However, from my own perspective, a modern person should have several careers of earning money due to the reasons presented below. Firstly, nowadays, people are more active, they want to have new opportunity, new challenger, new environment, so they find an addition careers. Secondly, because of the rising of price, people have to work overtime so that to every bill or invoice. Thirdly, If the finance of the company is unstable, It would be influence to the salary. For example, a person who is working as a teacher can also be an architect, an engineer, a manager...for any company they want

3Write a paragraph about job Empty e Thuy Mon Aug 27, 2012 9:44 pm

thugian891



Topic: support for several careers
Because:
- Economic crisis => several careers will be a self-prepare method for unemployment situation
- People are becoming more and more dynamic => They do not want to limit their abilities in one career. They want to earn much money from the main job and satisfy personal hobbies in other jobs.
- Example: a person can be a project staff, and a singer in the coffee bar because they like singing.
Content:
On the one hand, multi-career is becoming the developing trend of society. Because of positive effects of economic crisis, multi-career can be the most self-prepare method against the unemployment is more quickly increasing on the world. People today are becoming more dynamic, so they completely do not want to limit themselves in a job. They not only want to earn a lot of money from a main job but also need to satisfy their personal hobbies through others which also can earn money. For example, a person is not only a project staff but also a singer in coffee bar because she likes singing.

4Write a paragraph about job Empty E Nhung ạ! Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:21 pm

Nunanunong



Agree with several careers. Because:
- Secure income
Example: Have two separate jobs, when one goes out of business -> Still have another.
- Not bored with work.
Seeing new people and coping with responsibilities -> Refreshed and more inspiration for work
- Chance to find hidden strengths

There are various reasons that I prefer multiple careers to a single job. Before taking any other factors into account, it is normal to first consider that several careers could secure people’s income rather than just one job. If a person has two jobs in separate companies, when one firm goes out of business, he will still have income from another. In addition, those take more than one career are not expected to become bored with the work they do. Getting to see new people and coping with different responsibilities could make them refreshed and have more inspiration for work. Last but not least, taking multiple jobs could give people a chance to find their hidden strengths that they have never known.

5Write a paragraph about job Empty Paragraph several careers - single career Mon Aug 27, 2012 11:30 pm

Zonneschjin



- Agree
- Because :
+ for more opportunities
+ choose another job -> get out of stress and comfortable
+ both job : interested in + well-paid

It may be the best choice for people who have several careers or ways of earning money in the modern life. Firstly, the people who have several ways of earning money, can give more opportunities for their career. Not only that, several careers may help them get out of stress. They can choose another job and it may make them more comfortable. Finally, they can both do the job that they are interested in and the job which is well-paid. Because they can do the work they want and earn money to have a better quality of life. This is a good way to make money while pursuing their dream career.

6Write a paragraph about job Empty Re: Write a paragraph about job Tue Aug 28, 2012 11:47 am

Redhair_XU



Agree with "One single career"
Because:
- Focus on one job -> get more experience and skills -> become more professional
- Pursuing one career -> Make better contribution -> Easier to be promoted
- Life is not just about working -> Beside one chosen job, can spend time to enjoy other aspects of life

There goes one old saying "Jack of all and master of none"; however, in this modern world, this sentence still proves itself correct. Firstly, if we just focus on doing one job, we would get used to it and gain better experience as well as skills so we would become more and more professional. Secondly, pursuing one single career would allow us to place all of our time, effort and passion on one place, hence we would make a considerable contribution to the job and become more potential to be promoted. Finally, life is not just about working, if we could just set our heart on one career path, we would have more time to enjoy our life.

7Write a paragraph about job Empty Re: Write a paragraph about job Mon Sep 03, 2012 11:49 am

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