GOVERNMENT TO SPEND BUDGET ON HEALTH EDUCATION OR MEDICAL TECHNOLOGY

Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets on expensive medical technology and procedures. This money should be spent instead on health education to keep people well. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Write at least 250 words.

Note: Write your 2nd body paragraph in the format of a concession one.
- It is advisable to find out at least 3 different ways to express the idea "Government to spend money to do something". This would make your sentence become more flexible.


Deadline: 12:00 Thursday 26 Nov

Outlines:
I agree with the idea: “Government should spend their health budgets on health education”
Paragraph 1: People are able to learn how to prevent the spread of communicable diseases through the methods being taught in education. For example, through health education, some simple things such as wearing a flu mask in particularly affected areas always proves very effective in limiting the number of people affected annually.
Paragraph 2: Medical technology has direct impact on treating people’s disease. Nowadays, in spite of having severe diseases such as cancer, patients have still been treated effectively thanks to modern methods and specific relations. However, if people do not have knowledge of preventing a disease, they could be prone to it several times again. For example, stomachache can be treated easily with gastroscopy and abdominal surgery. But if patient is not instructed to eat cooked food, he or she probably could have to meet doctor again for such problem.