rewrite "the effects of technology on relationships"

Modern technologies can have both positive and negative effects on relationships.
On the one hand, technology helps us address work issue from home. Besides, it allows faster and more efficient daily communication. For example, these technologies provide new and innovative ways for us to communicate such as text messaging and chat. Finally it can help us find new relationships.
On the other hand, technology might cause conflict between family members. Moreover, the use of Internet and television by children and teenager also limits the amount of time spent with family. Another thing is that friendships may be difficult to last in a long time, as young people face-to-face interactions are less desirable than modern modes of communication. Futhermore, a delay reply can lead to anger. Our information was once private is now part of the public sphere.

On the one hand, technology allows us to address work issues from home. Besides, it allows faster and more efficient communication. For example, we have many new and innovative ways of communications such as text messaging and chat. Finally, it can help us build relationships.
On the other hand, technology can cause conflict between family members. Moreover, the use of Internet also limits the amount time,that children spend with their family. Another thing is that friendship may be difficult to last in along time, as teenagers preferred modern modes of communication to face-to-face interactions. Furthermore, a delayed reply or none at all can lead to suspicion and anger of young couples. One disadvantage is that our information which was once private can also be a part of the public sphere.