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Essay 06 - ENVIRONMENT - Products are made to last

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Topic this week:

The world is consuming natural resources faster than they can be renewed. Therefore, it is important that products are made to last. Governments should discourage people from constantly buying more up to date or fashionable products.

To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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2Essay 06 - ENVIRONMENT - Products are made to last Empty Essay 06 Thu Apr 05, 2012 9:52 am

brulee369

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Outline:

My opinion: Agree

- Idea 1: discourage people from constantly buying one more up to date or trendy products can lead the companies or manufactures reuse several items as many times as possible or recycle material. That will save the natural resource
- Idea 2: using throwaway products not only waste materials but also increase dramatically the amount of waste being generated each year. Thus, generate products which stay for a longer period has positive impact on having sustainable environment

Synonym:
- Fashionable = trendy = style; product = commodity
- Create = make = generate = manufacture; disposable = throwaway

My essay – Brulee 369
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It is certainly true that the amounts of resources on the earth’s surface are finite and it cannot be renewed as quickly as the consummation of human. This dangerous imbalance may lead to critical resource shortages in the years ahead. Therefore, in order to control this phenomenon, some people argue that products are made to last. Furthermore, government should restrict people to buy fashionable products. Because of following reasons, I strongly agree with this statement.

To begin with, discourage people from constantly buying one more up to date or trendy products can lead the companies or manufactures reuse several items as many times as possible or recycle material. That will save the natural resource. A good illustration of this is that instead of making clothes with new substances, creating clothing from textile recycling greatly reduces the amount of virgin resources necessary to generate products, including the land and water used to grow cotton, as well as pesticides and energy used in the agricultural and production process.

Additionally, nowadays, with economic and societal pressures, people are becoming much busier. Instead of choose products that are long lasting, they tend to use disposable products either for convenience’s sake, or because the products are initially cheaper. However, as the reality shows that the manufacturing process for products requires significant resources, such as water, energy and chemicals. Meanwhile, disposable commodities are used once and then thrown away. Consequently, using throwaway products not only waste materials but also increase dramatically the amount of waste being generated each year. Thus, manufacture such products which stay for a longer period has positive impact on having sustainable environment.

To sum up, natural resources are being used up at an alarming rate. I think that government play a vital role in reducing the overall consumption of virgin resources by restricting people to buy style products and by encouraging products that are made to last. This is methods to protect environment.

3Essay 06 - ENVIRONMENT - Products are made to last Empty my essay Thu Apr 05, 2012 3:27 pm

nguyenkhuyen



Outline:
- Because the world’s population increases dramatically, natural resources are running out of
- Companies should produce more fashionable products to satisfy more diversify demand.
- However, the more fashionable products are produce, the more natural resources will be continuously used
My essay
In today’s rapidly developing society, the issue of environment problem has aroused public concern. There have been several opinions and statement on this topic and one typically suggests that more up to date or fashionable products should be produced to satisfy consumer’s demand. However, from my own perspective, that government should create awareness and encourage people to consume and produce products that last a longer period of time due to the reason below.

To begin with, my personal view is that the government should have more methods to save natural resources and one of them is decrease of fashionable productions. Granted, the world’s population increases dramatically in recent years, which results in the gradual depletion of natural resources such as water, mineral, energy. While the human population grows, the earth's size and resources remain the same. In fact, the population explosion increases the consumer demand day by day. As a result, natural resources are being consumed faster than they can be renewed. If governments discourage people from buying fashionable products, the exhaustible energy source will be restricted. The governments can also encourage people to use products which are utilized many times.

However, many commentators are of the view that more fashionable products should be produce to satisfy demand. Admittedly, companies usually want to satisfy their customer best; therefore, they create many innovation generating products and want to sell them as much as possible. Their business decisions also depend on life cycle of a product. Nevertheless, the more fashionable products are produce, the more natural resources will be continuously used. Besides, protecting the environment for the next generations is the most important thing. Hence, people should buy products which are extension of using time instead of up to date products.

To sum up, I firmly commit to the notion that government should increase people’s conscious of protecting environment in order to protect the next generation’s future.
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4Essay 06 - ENVIRONMENT - Products are made to last Empty My essay Sun Apr 08, 2012 2:57 am

thuha



OUTLINE:
Agree
Side 1:
- The population growth is causing demand for resources to rise
- Companies compete against the others in trade
Side 2:
To come out fashionable products ceaselessly is to promote the development of society. However, it can not be denied that the environment is getting worse

ESSAY:

That the higher living standards and prompt industrialisation are increasing the use of natural resources in industry may lead to critical resource shortage in coming years. I’m strongly convinced of a statement that people should reduce the throughout consuming of products.

The first decade of the 21st century witnessed the population boom in over the world, causing demand for natural resources to rise such as water, food, electric, alternative energy and so on. It is inevitable that some nations are confronting with the depletion of non-renewable fossil fuels such as coal, oil and gas. In addition, firms compete against the others in trade. An undeniable fact is, in commercial perspective, a fashionable or up-to-date product will easily create shocking feelings for the public although almost products are made by utilizing the natural materials. Sooner or later, this way causes the natural non-balance.

Opponents of the ideas say that to come out fashionable products ceaselessly is to promote the development of society. Amittedly, the more developed the society gets, the more complex and diversified the people’s need becomes and inverse. There may be some truth in this argument, however, it can not be denied that the environment is getting worse whereas the culprit of the above problem is exploitation of natural resources, deforestation, land clearing and logging. The proof is that the earth’s atmosphere is warming up and the ice is melt some where. Therefore, protection of environment, namely natural sources is becoming a vital issue than ever.

All things considered, I believe that government and companies play important role in decreasing the consumption of natural resources by encourage people to become eco-friendly consumers.

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6Essay 06 - ENVIRONMENT - Products are made to last Empty My essay - again Thu Apr 19, 2012 11:24 pm

thuha



OUTLINE:
Disagree

1. The creation of fashionable products is unavoidable development of modern society.
2. Cutting down the use of up to date goods may be executed by imposing more taxes on companies or businesses

Synonym:
Discourage ~ cut down ~ limit ~ constrain ~ prevent
Up-to-date ~ fashionable ~ prevalent ~ modern
Product ~ goods ~ merchandise

ESSAY:

That the higher living standards and prompt industrialisation are increasing the use of natural resources in industry may lead to critical resource shortage in coming years. Some people argue that governments should prevent people from purchasing fashionable products but I reject this statement to a certain extent for these following reasons.

The first reason is that the creation of fashionable products is unavoidable development of modern society. An undeniable fact is that firms compete against the others in trade. In commercial perspective, a modern or up-to-date product will easily create shocking feelings for the public that leads a significant rise in consuming goods. It’s an obvious truth that the more developing society is, the better people’s need gets and the more diversified goods becomes.

The second reason is that cutting down the use of prevalent goods may be executed by imposing more taxes on companies or businesses. It is clearly that to create more borne expense will be able to lessen the production of modern products and also reduce the consumers to purchase one; However, this move tends to destroy some small or inexperienced companies. Consequently, occurring the social instability such as unemployment problems is inevitable. If the unemployment rate increases, the social security and moral standards are obviously threatened. Thus, attempting to improve natural resources by causing social instability is totally a bad solution.

All things considered, I believe that government plays an important role in decreasing the consumption of natural resources without any laws or policies. In stead of controlling the use of modern goods, they should improve people’s awareness of using resources for future generations

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