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ESSAY 05 - NATIONAL BUDGET ON HEALTH EDUCATION OR MEDICAL TECHNOLOGY? Untitled_zps8b9e32c7
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ESSAY 05 - NATIONAL BUDGET ON HEALTH EDUCATION OR MEDICAL TECHNOLOGY?

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Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgets on expensive medical technology and procedures. This money should be spent instead on health education to keep people well. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?




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2ESSAY 05 - NATIONAL BUDGET ON HEALTH EDUCATION OR MEDICAL TECHNOLOGY? Empty thuy - health care Sat Aug 03, 2013 9:47 pm

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Nowadays, health care is become the special notification to all people and organizations. It is true that expensive medical technology and procedures are invested a large amount of budgeting in most developed countries. While some people argue that these budgets should be spent in health education better. In my own opinion, I agree with the both ideas.
First of all, health care technologies provide more special and modern treatment methods which traditional treatment methods cannot do. Because of the advances in health care technologies, more patients are discovery their disease in the first stages and have the suitable method to treatments. For example, cancer patients may be cover by using the chemical treatment to burn the cellule out of their body. Moreover, these technologies also help the process of procedure being faster and more efficient. Telemedicine utilizes modern technology are the most popular example to prove the quality of its function. Because it allows a physician to interact with a patient online or indicates the number of hospital visits.
Secondly, budget spending in health education should be noticed more to increase awareness of people in taking care themselves. The reasons are because people often have less foundation knowledge about health care. Therefore, health educating helps people prevent common health issues, increase healthy living rates. For instant, common health disorders associated with obesity which are caused by the eating habits also be prevented if people understand and have knowledge about these.
In conclusion, health care technologies or health care education is needed to have a specification care and development to increase people health and efficient treatments.

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